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well, all i can say is :swoon:

 

that is really a beginning to draw the reader in. :oh:

 

thank you!! :flower:

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Wow....just....Wow ! It is an amazingly tantalizing start. You have an enormously appealing protagonist there and the setting is perfect. My only quibble would be, where is the rest of it? I want it all now. Shaharazad.

 

I will be patient. Not much choice really and I'm sure worth the wait. :manic:

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Yay! There's more. :chacha: I'm saving it for a treat after I get some chores done.

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that'll be it 'til next weekend at least...it's a sporadic thing, this one!

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:oh: then i am saving it for later, as a treat between taxes :lol:

 

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an incentive - i won't post the next bit of Chapter 2 until you've done them!!! :evil:

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Hey! That's not fair to me! :grumpy:

 

It's a good thing you didn't say till I do my taxes since that will be in March. :silly2:

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:smooch: maybe Moo will do them at last!!!! :lol:

 

and i need to finish chapter 4 and start 5 before i load up anything else anyway!

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:smooch: maybe Moo will do them at last!!!! :lol:

:blush2:

 

Jude, i promise to read it very soon. :yes: no hard promise to keep, either :p

 

 

:crit:

 

:shock:

 

wait!!! until i have done my taxes???? first i thought you meant until i had read the new chapter! :neutral: that is evil and unfair. :neutral::wail:

 

:crit: i could say i did them :manic: how would you know? :angel:

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Well, I just read the new bit and love it. It took a totally unexpected turn. :chacha: It just gets more mysterious and entertaining.

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:crit: i could say i did them :manic: how would you know? :angel:

 

:eye: the allseeing p'syclickal eye of :dip: - how else? :eye:

 

:roll:

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:lol: well - i am doing them! :angel: and a s a treat with my coffee i just read Flipside. :manic:

 

mad, i am so in love with that story already. not only is the lighthouse location a dream - the whole set-up and tone of voice is a delight. i am so looking forward to reading more of it.

 

:flower:

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:oh: love it, again.

 

i love that particular definition of "white trash" :roflmao::up:

 

and this is my idea of heaven: "In the height of summer, I can take a chair outside onto the balcony and enjoy the sunshine for about 22 hours."

 

a joy to read. i have such a vivid image of that lighthouse, and also of the marina scene. :flower:

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